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Let’s Have Some Fun Improving WordPress.com’s Ad Copy!

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I spotted an ad while browsing WordPress.com today that made me think, “Hmm, we can totally help make this better!” It’s not terrible! But it’s like showing up to a party in socks and sandals when you could be wearing those awesome light-up sneakers everyone compliments. Let’s give it some pizzazz!

Why This Ad Needs Our Creative Love

  • It’s all “discount-discount-discount” with no sizzle
  • Doesn’t make me feel the excitement of launching an awesome site
  • “Unlock Offer” sounds like I’m opening a treasure chest in a mobile game
  • Missing that special something that makes people click NOW instead of “maybe later”

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Why These Friendlier Versions Will Work Better

  1. They focus on what people REALLY want – to bring their ideas to life, not just save money
  2. They create a sense of fun and possibility
  3. They add a dash of urgency without sounding pushy
  4. The CTAs actually tell you what exciting thing is about to happen

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